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英作添削してください

0 名前:ねぎ:2006/11/03 03:22
本文はwww.japantimes.co.jp/shukan-st/articles/op20051216/op20051216text.htmです

What we Japanesn should do at first when a new foreign officer come to our office is to introduce ourselves immedeately to him or her.
Not knowing his or her name, we could not make friends with them ,I think.
They would be easy to spoke to us after we do it.

よろしくお願いします。
1 名前:名無しさん:2006/11/03 12:12
学校の先生にでも頼みなさい
2 名前:もさ富田:2006/11/03 13:00
君ら打たれ弱くてね、英作見せに来てね、いろいろ言うんですが、なんか傷つくみたいで二度と来なくなるんですよ
こっちとしちゃ「あれどうなったかな」って気になるんですが
あの…誘っちゃいませんよ?(笑)
3 名前:ねぎ:2006/11/03 13:26
宅浪なんですよ
4 名前:名無しさん:2006/11/03 14:44
本文も貼ってくれ
5 名前:名無しさん:2006/11/03 14:46
まあ英文で日本語文もだいたいわかるけど
結構間違い多いぞ
6 名前:ねぎ:2006/11/04 00:51
本文はれないんですけど・・・長すぎるみたいです
7 名前:名無しさん:2006/11/04 00:59

英訳じゃなくて要約なの?
8 名前:ねぎ:2006/11/04 01:54
どうおもうか?ってかんじです
9 名前:名無しさん:2006/11/04 01:57
めんどくせー
添削やめた
10 名前:富田:2006/11/04 05:44
それが大人の世界だ
11 名前:名無しさん:2006/11/05 04:26
母校の先生にでもしてもらいなさい
12 名前:某中堅予備校講師:2006/11/07 16:33
とりあえずやってみたw

What we Japanesn should do at first when a new foreign officer come to our office is to introduce ourselves immedeately to him or her.

→ Japanese people should better introduce themselves in meeting an unknown foreign officer, at the first time in his showing up to your office.

Not knowing his or her name, we could not make friends with them ,I think.

→ Without knowing each other's names, making friends with strangers are not quite easy, as you understand.

They would be easy to spoke to us after we do it.

→ Well, after counter introductions to each other for the ice-breaking, communication afterwards would be going the easier.
13 名前:名無しさん:2006/11/12 08:32
↑クソ駄文
14 名前:ミンミ ◆4Vt/54YQ:2006/11/30 20:46
文がDoこうよりスペルがDoこうかな・・・
ワルい文ではナイと思う

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